
My upcoming novella, Dog Meat, is set in the 1980s in a made-up country (the “Colony”), but the following scene happened to real-life family friends of ours (now American citizens). Ward is a little boy at home with his family. His mother and father (“Patro”) are intellectuals, and Revolution soldiers think intellectuals are dangerous.
The soldiers were angry, so angry. The family’s front door stood ajar, and the soldiers tramped about the living room, knocking books off the shelves and smashing icons with sledgehammers and cane sticks. Ward tried to press his way inside his mother’s body to get away from the uniformed men.
Patro crawled on his knees first to one soldier then the next. “We have done nothing wrong,” he said. Patro’s protest brought a swift cane to the back of his head.
“Patro!” Ward yelled, and his mother covered his mouth with her trembling hand.
Ward’s father wept while the family’s small house filled with smoke from burning books and the bookshelves that once held them. Then the angry men attacked the piano with their sledgehammers, and the discordant wails from the dying instrument joined the cries of Ward and his mother.
From Dog Meat** by Priscilla Bettis
**Sound intriguing? Dog Meat will be released on November 8th. You can preorder an e-book on Amazon or directly from the Potter’s Grove Press. (Paperbacks available on release day.)
In other news, I finished the first draft of my new novel (which might include an abandoned farmhouse and possibly ghosts). Woohoo! Horror author Rami Ungar asked if I was going to drink a bunch of good booze to celebrate and warned me not to drunk-blog about it. I told him nah, I was going to celebrate by eating a bunch of Oreos and sugar-high-blogging about it. (I sincerely hope I don’t regret this evening’s blog post!)
In other, other news, have you been following Bad Moon Rising on Teri Polen’s site? It’s a great way to “meet” horror and thriller authors. I had a turn on October 4th.
This quarter I am reading books from authors I follow online.
Currently reading: This Attraction Now Open Till Late by Bram Stoker Awards nominee Kyla Lee Ward, a collection of 13 delightfully dark tales.
Up next: A Peril in Ectoplasm (isn’t that a fab title?) by Teagan Ríordáin Geneviene, a Roaring Twenties paranormal novella.
Photo by Luke Besley on Unsplash.
Best wishes on the upcoming release, Priscilla. And good for you, celebrating with Oreos. You deserve it!
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Aw, thank you, Staci. 🙂 The old Oreo television jingle is running through my head!
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Me, too!
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Awesome excerpt, Priscilla, but horrifying that it happened to your friends. Thanks for the shoutout for BMR!
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Thank you, Teri.:-) You are welcome re BMR!
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Ooo I love this excerpt! Can’t wait to dig into your story once grad school semester is over. 😊
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Yay, thanks, Jonny! I hope you like it.:-)
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I’m sure I will!
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Sometimes real life is the most horrific thing of all.
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I totally agree, Deby! Thanks for stopping by.:-)
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Congratulations! And thinking people ARE dangerous.
I am commenting here because I wanted to send you this photo I took yesterday. I thought it might make good cover art.
Best,
Fawn
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Hi Fawn, thanks! And I’d love to see the photo. I sent you my email address through your Life Coach website contact.
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Congratulations! Great excerpt, Priscilla.
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Thank you, Bette!
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That is a riveting excerpt. What a nightmare for the family that endured that in real life. You captured the horror of it perfectly.
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Thank you, Marie! I hope you have a wonderful weekend.:-) p.s. I am TREASURING A God for All Seasons! I read a little every evening.
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I’m glad you are enjoying it.
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Great to hear you’ve finished your new novel, I know how difficult that can be and that excerpt sounded pretty exciting too!
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Thanks on both counts, Steve! Have a great rest of your weekend.:-)
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Love the graphic and the idea of soldiers burning books and pianos. Reminiscent of Fahrenheit 451 which I am slowly reading.
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I loved Fahrenheit 451! Happy reading, Pat.:-)
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Thanks, Priscilla.
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No reason to regret, Priscilla. It’s a great excerpt, very emotional.
Congrats on finishing the draft of the next book!
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Thank you, Jina! I hope you’re having a wonderful weekend!
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Congratulations on your forthcoming book. The excerpt is ace. I’ll definitely be getting a copy.
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Yay, thank you, Richard! I hope you like it.:-) Have a good and safe Halloween.
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Thank you. You too.
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LOVE the way you celebrate, Priscilla! Oreos and sugar-high blogging…BWAHAHAHA! Congrats on all the good news and writing! Excited about another perhaps haunted farmhouse story from you!
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Thanks, Courtney! Your comments always make me smile.:-)
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As one who hates to see a piano mistreated, that is a powerful scene, Priscilla. Thanks for sharing this snippet. Happy Halloween.
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Thanks, Teagan! When I heard the real-life story, the books were sad, but the piano made me cry. Happy Halloween!
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Thanks for the excerpt. Atmospheric and menacing. Perfect! Congratulations on your writing, and I have Teagan’s novella also on my list, so I look forward to hearing what you think of it. ♥
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Thank you for the kind words about my excerpt, Olga! I did get a chance to read Teagan’s new novella. It’s great fun, and I loved the main character Daphne!
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I loved hearing what Pax Panic said about Dog Meat. This scene sold me. I’ve preordered my copy!
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SQUEEE! Thank you, Christa.:-) You made my day!
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I can’t wait to read it!
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Burning the books and the bookshelves? The soldiers are bad people indeed! Love how excited you are. Sounds like all good things happening on the writing front at the moment 🙂
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Thanks, Olivia-Savannah! I hope Nano is going well.:-)
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Hi Priscilla – great post and what a chilling scene. It’s scary that these things are still happening. Congratulations on the upcoming release of “Dog Meat” and completion of the first draft of your new novel! 🙂
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Thanks, Barbara, on all counts! I’m glad you commented.:-)
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Congratulations on your upcoming novella! The excerpt sounds very powerful and very authentic – I’m not surprised that it’s based on real events. I preordered the book and I’m looking forward to reading it.
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Oh, JF, that’s wonderful! Thanks for the comment and the preorder and for making my day!
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Priscilla I just saw your review for my book. I just wanted to thank you for your wonderful review. I am very much looking forward to reading dog meat tomorrow.
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It’s a wonderful book, Thomas. Bronco’s story (and the rest of his two-legged and four-legged family members) sent me on a roller coaster of emotions!
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Thank you so much Priscilla
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Your writing draws me in! I hope the well-earned reviews are pouring in. Still reading, but I’ll leave one too. Congrats again.
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Thank you so much, Kelly! You rock!
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